Don’t make the story shorter 🙂
As long as the story doesn’t end with a cliffhanger (forever, not just for short time due to a new story part), it’s ok (for me) 😀
I like the details and that you added the doc as a caring scientist.
You could post ten pages a day and I’d still be clamoring for more. It’s an engaging story. I think you’ve paced this part just fine. Leaving us excited to find out what happens next is a feature, not a bug.
Aaaaaaaaaa the slow burn of the plot hurts my soul
yeh, it’s like slow poison, I’m sorry… I wish I could make this story a little shorter, but I don’t think it would hit the same I guess
Don’t make the story shorter 🙂
As long as the story doesn’t end with a cliffhanger (forever, not just for short time due to a new story part), it’s ok (for me) 😀
I like the details and that you added the doc as a caring scientist.
Hope i can enjoy this comic some years more 🙂
You could post ten pages a day and I’d still be clamoring for more. It’s an engaging story. I think you’ve paced this part just fine. Leaving us excited to find out what happens next is a feature, not a bug.
Agreed, this is very nice balance of cliffhangers between pages and telling enough of the story to make people want more.